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05/20/2003 11:05:16 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Hi Mike!
Composition
The legos are so messy and the jacket is hung up so nice and neat. I'd have knocked the chair over, strewn the jacket on the ground and had a kid passed out in the middle...but that's just me! lol Anyways - it's a good setup here.
Color
Unreal beautiful colors! I even like the border, as I said in my comment during the challenge!
Lighting
I like it - except for the diagonal shadow along the left. Too bright and you blow this shot out, too dark and the vibrancy is lost from the colors - beautiful medium here!
Subject matter
When I think bright colors, and primaries, I think children too - good setup, obviously meets the challenge, and does it very well.
Overall
Congrats on the pic and the above average score. Keep shooting!
Mav
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05/18/2003 11:47:18 PM |
| I love the composition of this shot, but I think if you could have placed a solid color (white or black perhaps) under the chair and toys, it would have been more effective. The color of the carpet seems to take away from the strength of the primaries. Also, on a side note, and not related to your score at all, the broad yellow band in your border really pulls the eyes out of the picture. Maybe if the red and yellow were reversed. |
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05/18/2003 10:48:57 PM |
| This is cute, and definately fits the challenge. I think the border is a little overkill though. Focus, and lighting appear to be good. I do wish though that there could have been a bit more lighting under the chair as to not mute the colors of the blocks under the chair. Otherwise, a nice job! ~Heather~ |
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05/16/2003 06:52:54 AM |
| Wow now there are a lot of primary colors in this pic :-) What I particularly like is that all the colors are the same tone of that color, good! |
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05/15/2003 11:22:18 PM |
| Great concept. Focus looks good. I think maybe taking the shot from lower angle and shooting up to have the white wall behind it and get the grey carpet out would have given more impact. Doesn't affect the score, but the border is hideous! |
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05/15/2003 11:33:21 AM |
| Such a childlike atmosphere in this shot. The border really ADDS to this pic - and that's saying something. Excellent use of availables! |
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05/15/2003 05:25:09 AM |
| Whoa, steady on the bordering there! way too much ... Nice photo behind that, but it really distracts from it. |
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05/14/2003 10:26:29 PM |
| Kids do have primary colored stuff. The white balance seems off as the reds are orangy. |
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05/13/2003 09:42:26 AM |
| Nice and bright. The border goes well. |
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05/12/2003 04:24:24 PM |
| Nice color saturation here. I don't care for the carpet, but this meets the challenge with flying colors, as it were... |
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05/12/2003 02:50:56 PM |
| Very good.....perfect composition.. |
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05/12/2003 10:44:12 AM |
| I think this image is ok overall, but the border is too loud and it is competing for attenion. Borders should be supportive of your subject and not distracting from it. |
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05/12/2003 10:33:53 AM |
| Cute. Nice arrangement and composition. The colors all match each other very well, also, which pulls the whole thing together well. |
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05/12/2003 08:47:57 AM |
| The frame is too much for my taste. But the colors do stick out, it's primary colors allright. |
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05/12/2003 04:13:14 AM |
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