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05/22/2003 02:29:04 AM |
*Critique Club*
I've already said some things on this, so I'll try to elaborate a bit on the comments I already made.
I'll start out with the biggest problem for me, and that would be the shadows. I wonder if maybe a light from above would help, or some fill flash? I just think that the shadow takes away from the bright colors you have here in your shot.
The second nit pick is the fact that you have cropped off the top of the ropes, but we can still see that more exists. Looks like the ends of the rope. I think that it would be better to see the entire thing, or at least make it so that we can't tell that there is "something more" to look at. The crop is a little strange to me on the top.
The focus and clarity are really good. I like how we can see the texture in the rope, and we get great detail out of that.
The flowers are a cute touch. I wonder though if it were possible to be looking down into the flowers (looking down into the center) rather than looking down ONto them. They are kind of slanted downward, which i understand cause they are only on a flat surface, but if you could somehow make it so they slant up, I think that would be cool.
I don't mind the white negative space, but I think that in order for it to work right, there could be some space to the top of the ropes as well.
~Heather~ |
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05/18/2003 10:51:20 PM |
| This is cute, but the shadow bothers me. The shadow of the flowers isn't so bad, but the shadow of the rope is a little much. The colors are really nice and really jump out of the shot. focus and clarity are really good as well. ~Heather~ |
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05/17/2003 11:25:37 PM |
| Great focus and lighting. I think leaving the flower out would have worked better. |
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05/17/2003 07:55:23 AM |
| I would have cropped this one, and the shadows r 2 big. But it is a really cool idea and the colors are exellent...good job...and good luck |
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05/15/2003 11:21:58 AM |
| Just a hair over exposed, but I like the rope- it's very bright and colorful - perfectly primary! Good job here. 9 |
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05/15/2003 02:30:11 AM |
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05/14/2003 10:13:48 PM |
| Nice composition. The reds are a bit off. Maybe check white balance. |
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05/13/2003 02:37:17 PM |
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05/13/2003 11:03:00 AM |
| The colours are great and I like the idea, but the composition is off - I'd crop out some of the empty space on the right. I also find myself wanting to see the ends of the plait. |
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05/12/2003 04:25:40 PM |
| Fun and original idea! Composition is wonderful. |
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05/12/2003 07:34:03 AM |
| beautiful colors and sharp detail. well done! |
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05/12/2003 03:51:51 AM |
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