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05/22/2003 01:30:08 AM |
*Critique Club*
Since this loads from top to bottom, the very first thing I saw come up was yellow and green. I think that the dark area in the middle almost hogs the spotlight. I really like the yellow and red, and I think that had you been able to avoid the blue/yellow turning into the green, and all the colors clashing to make the dark area in the center, this would be really really appealing to me.
I'm not generally a fan of abstract, however, I am a fan of color. For the challenge, I think that I would like to have seen more of the blue. However, I really like the green in the shot outside the challenge.
There are some horizontal marks near the bottom of the photo that look like a printout where the printer was running out of ink. Is this some kind of glare from the container you mixed this in? Not a huge deal, but being such strong lines, it stands out from the flowing swirl of the rest of the shot.
Focus and clarity look good, and lighting looks good as well. My only big hang up is the dark area in the middle. I'd like to see more brightness to go with that beautiful yellow.
~Heather~ |
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05/18/2003 03:28:28 PM |
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05/16/2003 11:43:53 PM |
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05/16/2003 06:43:16 PM |
| Very nice. I guess this would work both for primary and secondary colours :) What is it? Looks like silk in the wind, or ink in water. I wonder if it would look just as good with a white mat. Love the transparency. ~8 |
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05/16/2003 05:15:50 PM |
| interesting effect. Nice abstract. |
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05/16/2003 10:26:02 AM |
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05/16/2003 06:39:11 AM |
| Wow abstract! This is like one of those cards a pyschiatrist gives you and asks you what you see :-) I find the border is a little overwhelming for this image, I would have halved the thickness of it. Other than that this is very very good! |
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05/16/2003 02:04:14 AM |
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05/15/2003 10:51:49 PM |
| Very interesting abstract with the food colors! Me like. Lots of lines and swirls to look at. |
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05/13/2003 10:44:15 PM |
| Wonderful abstract! The saturation of the yellow then the bursts of red and blue make a wonderful pattern. Did you try flipping the picture so the blue was on the left side of the frame? I wonder how that would change the feel of the shot? Would it make it calmer or more turbulant? Good effective picture. 7 -danny |
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05/13/2003 02:32:25 PM |
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05/13/2003 02:12:16 AM |
| i like your idea of showing the primary colors, the secondary colors produced is unavoidable because of the technique u used.......... but its still neat and the overall result is a nice abstract piece..... |
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05/12/2003 11:47:35 PM |
| Sweeeeeet. If you could get more Blue it would be even better. |
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05/12/2003 03:12:42 PM |
| amazing light......really nice.. |
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05/12/2003 10:28:25 AM |
| playful, creative and a good interpretation of the challenge. be carerful! looks like you are about to create some secondary colors ;-) |
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05/12/2003 09:57:46 AM |
| Clever idea, I've tried this, myself. Very nice abstract image. |
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05/12/2003 08:16:09 AM |
| Very pretty. How did you do this - ink in water? Great abstract. |
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05/12/2003 04:43:14 AM |
| Beautiful! One of my favs. I just wish the horizontal lines at the bottom weren't there. I assume it's a reflection. Is this done with food coloring? |
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