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09/18/2005 10:31:15 AM |
| It's a nicely composed photo but there is a lack of contrast? It seems too washed out. A tighter crop at the bottom and on the right might also return focus on her great expression and beautiful face! |
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09/16/2005 04:11:21 PM |
| Would like to see this slightly more crisp/vivid. |
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09/16/2005 02:28:45 AM |
| more contrast would make this really strong - |
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09/15/2005 05:06:19 AM |
| IMO this needs a much tighter crop. The lighting is also not very good, as the image looks very flat and there are shadows on her face while the background id light (what is the main subject here). The model looks tense and unresponsive (the body language with the folded arm and her facial expression). I will have to give this a 4. |
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09/13/2005 11:59:43 PM |
| Wonderful portrait, it just seems the colors are a bit washed out. |
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09/13/2005 10:05:04 PM |
| Nice shot, the shadowing is nice. |
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09/13/2005 08:26:36 PM |
| I am really astonished by this model. She seems like someone I would meet for tea on thursdays. I think just the look of the model makes an almost instant connection with the viewer. On the tech. side it's a little out of focus and over exposed just a tad. I like your choice of background but the pose has to much going on in the bottom right hand corner. Mabey take off her braclet and see what that does. great shot overall though |
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09/13/2005 12:51:30 PM |
| maybe just rotate the face toward the window some and use a tripod or more steady surface. Nice composiiton though. |
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09/13/2005 12:54:10 AM |
| Great choice for a model but the focus especially in the face is off for me. |
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09/12/2005 09:49:05 PM |
| Underexposed, fill flash would have punched this up a bit more. I am no sure if the underexposure has caused the softness but it lacks focus. |
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09/12/2005 08:05:22 PM |
| On my monitor, this shot seems a bit blurry, but I like the portrait. Her expression makes me feel like she is a very proud woman. :) |
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09/12/2005 05:15:37 PM |
| She could be an interesting subject. I would like to see better focus and more even lighting on her face. The white of the background doesn't blends in too much with her hair and the two tone background is distracting. |
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09/12/2005 04:58:23 PM |
| nice should have maybe been a little clearer and brighter |
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09/12/2005 05:43:13 AM |
| The natural light works really well here but sitting back like this makes the focus on the face lacking contrast. Leaning forward in the exact same position would have worked better.. |
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09/12/2005 01:35:50 AM |
| Very pretty lady!! Too bad her face is in shadow. Could use a little work with lighting. |
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09/12/2005 01:14:57 AM |
| Great pic but just looks a little flat and faded. Work on the contrast and brightness and this will be a great photos |
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