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12/27/2005 10:54:59 AM |
Greeting from the Critique Club
First of all I must say, like everyone else perhaps, your model looks strikingly great for someone who has been up since 4am ;)
On to the show. The overall tonalities of this image struck me best at first. As my eye pans around the image, mostly on her face of course, the contrast and tonalities are spot on. I really do like the approach of using BW for this image. The smoothness in her skin is evident and the texture in her hair is quite rich and pleasing to the eye.
My only drawback is the background. IMHO, had it been all white, this would have probably been a higher rated image. I would probably add anywhere between a .1 to a .3 to this image. It is almost a high key image and I'm quite fond of it myself and so are a few folks here on DPC. There is a hot spot on her left hand but nothing really to downgarde this beautiful image.
Overall I think your score reflects your protrayal of this image for this challenge. I love the image and rated it fairly high (8). Keep on shooting and I can't wait to see more of your work.
Rikki |
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12/20/2005 11:20:45 PM |
| I really like this. Its a little sickening tho that your model could look that good even at 4:00 in the morning :) |
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12/19/2005 09:14:05 AM |
| And...... Was it the last one, or did you end up with a blue eye? |
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12/19/2005 12:59:15 AM |
| Haha lol, what might make this more effective is what this girl did: //www.dpchallenge.com/how.php?HOW_ID=40 with your eyes. |
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12/18/2005 07:46:16 PM |
| A beautiful model. A clarity of texture in this photo allow for me to say that this is one of the best portraits I have seen in some time. Exquisite. 9 |
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12/17/2005 06:31:00 PM |
| i dont think this photograph fits the title of the challenge given... no disrespect but your model does look like she likes what she was doing..... i dont feel the feedback from this image... but the effort i gave you a fair grade |
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12/17/2005 06:21:18 PM |
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12/17/2005 04:28:44 PM |
| Very nice portraid. Good contrast, use of B&W. Amazing eyes... 8 |
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12/17/2005 03:13:00 PM |
| i love the lighting. thats what i would feel like if it were that late! lol |
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12/17/2005 02:13:18 AM |
| Nice portrait, this would make a good stock photo. |
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12/16/2005 08:29:26 PM |
| Really nice tones and lighting. Last what? |
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12/16/2005 01:42:22 AM |
| If only eyes could kill! Good work! |
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12/15/2005 11:21:41 PM |
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12/15/2005 07:43:16 PM |
| Nice tonality and focus - she doesn't look tired enough. :-) |
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12/15/2005 03:47:23 PM |
| crop off more of the left. it's dece |
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12/14/2005 10:27:17 PM |
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12/14/2005 11:54:56 AM |
| Nice picture, beautiful model but it wouldn't stand without the title... |
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12/14/2005 09:24:39 AM |
| She's just too darn pretty for 4 to 5 a.m., dang it. LOL |
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12/14/2005 09:10:11 AM |
| I love her expression. Great capture. B&W made this pic too. Color wouldn't have conveyed the emotion. 8 |
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12/14/2005 01:07:54 AM |
| Good shot, and I bet she wishes that you didn't have to enter in this challenge, but I am pleased you did, well done...... |
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