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01/18/2006 12:23:37 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Wow, look at the pretty colors. Definitely that is my firs timpression.
Composition:
Composition isn't the strongest part of this photo, but it's acceptible. Putting a bit more black space to the right side of the photo would have made the "Burst of Color" more interesting.
Subject:
Subject is clear and well executed.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
All good! Colour is vibrant and well-saturated. Focus is sharp and shows great detail. Light is just right and well exposed.
To grow its vote?:
Somehow get some water droplets into play? LOL ... seriously, you made a wonderful caputre here. Perhaps a little more interest in the composition would have grown the vote a bit.
Summary:
Job well done! You definitely had a good run here.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/16/2006 09:51:33 PM |
Thanks Ursula! I bought 7 more different holographic bags....oh my...we're all in trouble now! Damn OC disorder.
BTW! Thanks for all the comments during the challenge. |
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01/16/2006 12:49:17 PM |
| Rob, should have known this one was yours, it looks "banmorn" :) Love that bag. |
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01/15/2006 02:42:48 PM |
| Very colorful. The colors really stand out. I like the use of holographic bag. 9 |
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01/15/2006 11:04:51 AM |
| GORGEOUS! Absolutely a perfect photo for this challenge. And so expertly executed! 10 |
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01/15/2006 12:21:45 AM |
| I really like the way you've composed this and the way the lighting plays off the subject. Good choice to shoot against the black setting too.... 7 |
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01/14/2006 04:19:58 PM |
| Very vibrant and crisp. I like the black background and the repetition of the gaudy, unnatural colors of the flowers in the holographic bag. |
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01/12/2006 06:11:41 AM |
| WOW!!! super, super, magic shot, deserves a ribbon for sure. I just love it. |
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01/09/2006 02:19:32 PM |
| Great use of color for a very upbeat photograph. Great job! |
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01/09/2006 12:57:42 PM |
| Color offsets the subject from --- what? Nicely photographed, though. |
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01/09/2006 11:48:06 AM |
| Fun colors (fun bag too) - well lit I like the contrast with the black background. |
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01/09/2006 11:09:27 AM |
| A little busy for my liking. I think I would have put the flowers in a black vase, or something clear. |
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01/09/2006 09:42:01 AM |
| Beautiful color and composition! :) |
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01/09/2006 09:09:28 AM |
| beautiful entry - one of my favourites so far!! |
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01/09/2006 12:58:50 AM |
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