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02/03/2006 06:20:03 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club
First Impression: nice silhouette against a pretty sky.
Composition: You did a nice job on this picture with the placement of the bird. the close cropping really steers the viewers focus to the bird. That said, personally I think a little more space on the right, and possibly the top would strengthen the image.
Technical and PP: Exposure and colors look good. One commentator mentioned a little fringing around the silhouette which is noticable. I find this aspect hardly distracting to my eye because it is so slight. the small greenish cloud right behind the birds head is a little bit of a distraction. Advanced editing may have let you clone it out.?? The vignetting works well with this picture. Did you do some selective blurring on the BG?
Challenge results: 5.5xx is respectable. Maybe it didnt have that "hit the voter in the head" fantasy angle. Keep up the good work. You have some nice pics in your portfolio. I especially like your tribute entry.
Feel free to PM me if any questions.
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01/29/2006 11:43:29 PM |
| Beautiful!! Love the silhouette. |
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01/29/2006 10:36:12 PM |
| Very nice and quite dream like. Bumping up. |
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01/27/2006 12:23:24 PM |
| Nice silhouette of the bird, although i would have liked to see a more interesting sky. |
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01/27/2006 08:10:22 AM |
| Nice use movement it adds emphasis to the image. |
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01/26/2006 10:23:56 AM |
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01/25/2006 11:17:35 PM |
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01/24/2006 07:31:20 AM |
| Spiritually uplifting..... |
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01/23/2006 11:41:16 PM |
| Not sure how this really relates to fantasy...though for some reason I am reminiscent of Magritte paintings. |
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01/23/2006 03:57:51 PM |
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01/23/2006 02:09:28 PM |
| Beautiful sillohuette. I like the blues in the background and the shady corners. 8 |
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01/23/2006 01:42:41 AM |
| yes, i dream this too...love the colours...reminds me of Jonothan livingstone Seagull! |
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01/23/2006 12:47:17 AM |
| Nice capture and concept. I little bit of fringeing around the bird is a let down |
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