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03/06/2006 10:26:31 AM |
*critique club*
I like the shot, there's a lot to look at, perhaps too much to look at. It's hard to get the top of the building as well as the surrounding buildings. The main subject is off center which is good, but the fact that it's cut off at the top takes away a little. The bottom 10% doesn't really show too much, so perhaps it would have worked better including the top of the building while at the same time cutting off just a bit at the bottom (not too much, though).
I agree with the other commentors that the image needs some more contrast. As is, everything looks washed out, or maybe faded is a better word. I like the toning, but keep in mind when it comes to sepia toning, different people like different things.
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02/28/2006 05:21:21 AM |
| A tight top-crop and perhaps a little too light on the contrast... |
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02/25/2006 02:38:05 AM |
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02/24/2006 01:24:54 AM |
| Interesting choice of colors, but wish there was just little more contrast. |
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02/23/2006 10:27:20 PM |
| I don't think the color you have picked enhances this image; it makes me think the air is badly poluted. |
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02/23/2006 07:22:04 PM |
| I think this needs a contrast boost. |
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02/22/2006 10:17:47 PM |
| i dont really like this shot. The color you shoes is making it looks like a big smog cloud is on the city. Its just not working for me |
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02/22/2006 03:54:33 PM |
| i think it could use some better contrast |
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02/22/2006 11:24:50 AM |
| This image just seems too flat to me. It need a large boost in the contrast IMO. |
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02/22/2006 10:25:38 AM |
| Image lacks contrast. I like the duotone you used, but I think it makes it difficult to really contrast when you have lots of details. I like the subject matter, and the composition is great. |
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02/22/2006 09:30:44 AM |
| Fuzzy, and the yellow doesn't help. Check the spelling of Manhattan. |
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