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05/12/2006 10:49:45 PM |
Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Positives:
Strong image. The composition, color and lighting are all good.
Suggested Improvements:
Make things a bit more clear in terms of the story you're trying to convey. The wording on the title has me confused to be honest. Did he lose a son/daughter that was his "life"?
Also, as a news worthy image having more of the guys face (assuming the story is about him) would have been better. As is this makes for a good emotive image but one that is too abstract for a particular story since we can't ID the person. That's probably the reason why this scored as low as it did because everything else suggests a much higher score.
Summary:
Strong image but one that may have suffered for being too vague. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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05/07/2006 07:26:46 PM |
| Great shot for the challenge...good fire shot |
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05/03/2006 05:40:42 PM |
| Strong photo, excellent composition. |
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05/03/2006 08:50:37 AM |
| This is a very moving image..... |
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05/03/2006 06:55:41 AM |
| strong. the compo is cool and i love the fire reflection on dudes face and jacket |
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05/02/2006 01:17:30 AM |
| Strong compsition and foreground elements. |
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05/01/2006 10:16:52 AM |
| I'm kinda lost on the context, but I can see this running with a feature story. |
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