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06/06/2006 01:52:25 PM |
*Critique Club*
My first impression of this photo is that it is very busy. Too much to look at with my eyes not really finding a main resting point. Not YOUR fault, just maybe not my choice of subjects.
The distortion only adds to the confusion in my opinion as well. It almost smooshes the photo toward the center, making for a smaller area for all the factors of the photo.
Focus and clarity are great. I think you did a great job getting nice crisp lines and sharp edges.'
Color is also good. Nice blues, yellows and reds, without going overboard and oversaturating.
I think going with the vertical crop was a good choice here as well.
You scored well, and I think that was on technical aspects. In my personal opinion, the reason it did not score even higher was simply on visual appeal. The chaos hurts it a bit for me.
Overall though, a technically good shot.
~Heather~ |
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06/04/2006 04:50:41 PM |
I guess those pipes are for hamsters that may live in the building. :)
I love the design, and you have a great perspective and good focus throughout. Great shot. |
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06/03/2006 06:02:07 PM |
| Is it the distortion from the lens or does the building look like that? |
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06/02/2006 12:25:39 AM |
| Is the building on the left underconstruction? I wonder why there is no ceiling or floors in it? |
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06/01/2006 09:35:26 PM |
| I like the colors and shapes and different materials shown. This is one case where the perspective may have hurt the picture a bit with the right side leaning a bit too much. |
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05/31/2006 10:38:20 PM |
| WoW Factor! Love the colors and lighting. Very nice! 10 |
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05/31/2006 09:38:01 AM |
| Indeed a dazzling design, with well-placed splashes of color. Well shot! 9 |
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05/31/2006 08:28:09 AM |
| A little to busy for my taste..... |
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05/31/2006 07:06:03 AM |
| Nice combination of lines, shapes, colors. |
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05/30/2006 08:26:56 PM |
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05/30/2006 05:56:21 PM |
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05/30/2006 11:08:34 AM |
| Great photo! I would like to see the verticles straighted but I'm a newcomer and not sure if that would be within the competition rules? |
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05/30/2006 07:58:53 AM |
I really dig the long vertical aspect of this shot that plays into the feel of the office. perfect colors and placement of the blue and yellow; and the red on the side makes a nice touch too.
Now, that being said, I don't feel you will "wow" people enough to win, but I personally think you are top three and you get my vote. |
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05/30/2006 06:41:50 AM |
| busy but I think that works here, good color and lines |
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05/30/2006 06:13:07 AM |
| Something about this one caught my eye. Not sure if it's the colors or just how "busy" it looks. I like it. It looks good. |
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