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08/28/2006 10:13:57 PM |
| not a bad one could be much better than this. |
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06/20/2006 06:11:48 PM |
| Well I must say I din't like it very much. Not expected of you. You are capable of better one. This is little vapid. |
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06/12/2006 05:06:26 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Great focus on the flooring and the door detail, but the highlights make it difficult to determine if the model is crisp or not. Your coloring and tones are terrific, suggesting an appropriately chosen white balance.
Lighting: I do like the tones that your lighting created inside the room, but I think that the window is a bit harsh. I think that the overexposure takes away detail from an obviously interesting model.
Composition/Content: The centered composition works nicely, while the flooring slowly draws the viewer into the image. Once at the model, the window light competes too strongly for the viewer's attention.
My Opinion: You did a wonderful job meeting the challenge, and I think that this one scored pretty close to its potential as it is. With just a little less exposure on that door window, I think that this one would have been up there near the top 10.
Eric
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06/12/2006 01:09:02 AM |
As I said before, plus - you should have beaten me yet you didn't. I'll give you another chance: tuesday is the end of the unexpected finds... give me your best shot.
-Serge |
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06/12/2006 12:48:37 AM |
| Knew this was yours Judi. Tastefully done as always and deserving of a bit better score IMO. |
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06/12/2006 12:45:52 AM |
Judi, I am amazed that this challenge entry didn't score a top 10 finish. There were at least 12 photos that I scored 5 or less that finished above yours. Sometimes I just shake my head and say "hmmmm".
I still love your entry and am adding to my favorites. |
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06/12/2006 12:43:51 AM |
| I don't get the voting public anymore. This shot is terrific. Well, you know it's good, I know it's good.... who cares what other people think. LOL ;~D |
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06/12/2006 12:43:38 AM |
| Well done Judi, but I think it deserved a much better, score due to the technical & artistic side of this great image..... |
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06/12/2006 12:43:22 AM |
Had no idea this was you, Judi! ;-) Have to agree with cheeseman- no others like them.
k... gotta stop looking now. :P |
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06/12/2006 12:26:59 AM |
| I knew it was you from the hair and the butt... there is no others like either on DPC. |
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06/11/2006 10:39:06 PM |
| Daring picture, nice model. Lighting and colors to my liking as well |
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06/11/2006 09:46:14 PM |
| Wish it was windy. Obviously won't comment on the body since it's probably not the intent (although it's appreciated greatly). Window is a little blown which takes away from the subject, but the lighting in the room is a nice effect. |
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06/11/2006 10:35:31 AM |
| nice job, different but i like it |
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06/11/2006 05:08:11 AM |
The room is DEFINITELY NOT empty! LOL
The song "Let the sunshine in" pops into my head. :) Excellent. |
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06/11/2006 01:04:33 AM |
| Amazing image here, just AMAZING, and you really deserve to win a RIBBON,.....I love it so much, and yes, it also has the "WOW" factor as well. |
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06/09/2006 06:04:06 PM |
I'm sure you are aware of how beautiful your body is, and how to use it to full photographical effect. I only wish that you've composed it so that there wasn't that streak of light through your crotch. I had mixed feelings about it, and finally decided against it. Yes, this way it reveals just a little bit more than without it, but I would have liked it the same even with just a hint of the shape.
Technically, the whole image has a dreamy look to it, the aura around you and the scarf brings out the emotions. Scarf matches the hair color, which is a nice touch. The light in the window is a tad too bright, but since any shorter exposure would have lost all the details of the floor, this is probably the best you could do given the circumstances.
Good luck with the score! (with a bump to 9)
-Serge |
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06/09/2006 05:52:09 PM |
| Nothing like "sex sells", eh? I'm not voting, but good luck. Personally, I wouldn't score this much more than average because the image is going for sex appeal more than photograpic quality. JMO of course. ;^) |
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06/09/2006 03:44:46 AM |
| The blue appearing in the processing a bit off puting. back for a second bumping..Forget the processing win the race... |
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06/08/2006 09:03:54 PM |
| Paging Dr. Jones......Please report to the front page.....Dr Jones....front page please. If this is not DrJones please disregard. |
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06/06/2006 10:10:42 PM |
| Love this photo. The pose in particular really appeals to me. Damn that scarf! :-) If there is anything wrong technically with this I just don't care. 10 |
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06/06/2006 09:09:32 PM |
| Romantic and beautiful, but I do not feel the emptiness of the room because such a small part of it is shown. |
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06/06/2006 07:30:35 PM |
| Judi? If not, please take it as the compliment it was intended to be. ;-) Great shot - love the comp & color tones. Seems like there may be a very slight tilt down to the right, but it may be that I need to put another matchbook under that corner of my laptop... (ha) Seriously, outstanding photo. I really like it. Well done and good luck - bumping up. |
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06/06/2006 02:18:02 PM |
| Nice framing of the subject. |
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06/06/2006 12:37:09 PM |
| Nice photo needs more emphasis on the room though |
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06/06/2006 07:05:19 AM |
| very nice. expect to see this near the top. |
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06/06/2006 06:19:08 AM |
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06/06/2006 12:11:33 AM |
| great shot...it could have been off centered and had a little different effect...but that's my opinion! |
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06/05/2006 10:25:25 PM |
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06/05/2006 09:46:06 PM |
| Perfectly good image for me. I like the lighting and composition. Only one little thing: I̢۪d like to see a little more of an empty room for this particular challenge. 9 from me and good luck. |
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06/05/2006 08:17:23 PM |
| Hmmm the door upright bisects the figure, just feel that maybe another time of day to reduce the over exposed window just feel that there is a image here but not this one it just misses the mark for me |
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06/05/2006 02:28:03 PM |
| Now this I like! The pose is striking as well as the contrast, colors, and dramatic lighting. My pick for a top 10 finish. |
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06/05/2006 02:20:23 PM |
| Very nice. I like that raw sensuality in this. The lighting on the floor could be brighter, IMO. If you dodged that area just a little bit that would make for a nice visual that leads your eyes upward. |
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06/05/2006 10:01:24 AM |
| does this count as 2 "things", the girl and the scarf? Awesome image though. |
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06/05/2006 08:20:03 AM |
| Excellent. The red really makes the shot. Great back lighting. The overall mood is emotive and a bit mysterious. Judi? You did it again!! 9 |
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06/05/2006 12:56:09 AM |
| seems blurry where the window is, maybe just overexposed, but nice idea, good composition |
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06/05/2006 12:15:22 AM |
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