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07/19/2006 09:18:15 PM |
| WOW, this is wonderful and a vast improvement over the original. I love the depth of field and the catchlights in her eyes. The composition is fabulous, too. EXCELLENT!! |
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06/13/2006 06:21:08 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: The eyes are beautiful and crisp, but the rest of the image is a bit too soft. I do like images with the angelic blur, but I think that this one is a bit overdone. I am not sure if it was the post-processing or the extremely shallow depth of field, but there is a bit too much of it. It looks like a neat image layer with a mask over the eyes and mouth.
Lighting: Your lighting is pretty nice. Almost everything is nicely exposed with all elements evenly lit. I would like to see that hair lit a little more. Just a little detail was lost there.
Composition/Content: I do prefer this offset composition to the original, more centered composition. You captured a very nice expression that she will love for years.
My Opinion: The coloring and post-processing were better in the original. The composition and lighting in this one was much better. A combination of the two would have probably pushed the top 10.
Eric
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06/13/2006 05:02:45 PM |
Shit, is de challenge alweer over. Had er nog niet eens naar gekeken. :(
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06/12/2006 11:43:51 PM |
| Incredible work, I really like how the DOF favors the eyes and mouth. Beautiful model with a captivating expression. |
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06/12/2006 11:32:34 PM |
| Beautiful close-up portrait! Good light and color. |
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06/12/2006 11:16:59 PM |
a little too much blur on the face, i think, but lovely everything else
Message edited by author 2006-06-13 00:25:21. |
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06/12/2006 09:56:31 PM |
| It would be nice to see a little more detail in her eyes. NI takes away her natural skin. |
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06/12/2006 03:37:53 AM |
| You have captured a great expression. The next trick is to try and avoid the window reflections in her eyes. |
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06/11/2006 08:22:45 AM |
love the focus on the eyes, just maybe a little too soft on the rest of the face.
9 from me as i do really like the shot
Good luck
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06/10/2006 09:29:48 PM |
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06/10/2006 07:58:30 PM |
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06/09/2006 01:28:40 PM |
| smart portrait, I like the neat image effect. |
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06/09/2006 07:06:27 AM |
| Great portrait. I like the soft blur on the skin. |
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06/08/2006 08:14:46 PM |
| Fantastic image of Tamara Peter! This definitely is a DEFINITE improvment from your last photo of Tamara! The eyes, the DOF used are terrific! She would be proud. From your shot two years ago, yes my friend, you've come a long way ;) Great job Peter! |
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06/08/2006 07:05:35 PM |
| Very well composed. The blure effect is too srong on the face. I think it's because the borders of the blur effect are too clean cut. |
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06/07/2006 02:48:36 PM |
| She's grown up a bit in the last couple of years and you've improved your skills as well. ;-) If my research is correct, this is Philos31. And talk about an improvement! To be honest, I thought this was Manny's (I hope you take that as a compliment). Outstanding. The reflection in her eyes makes this portrait sing. 9 |
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06/07/2006 06:52:09 AM |
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06/06/2006 02:18:30 PM |
| Very good capture of the eyes, the really reach out and grab you. Very nice! |
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06/06/2006 01:30:48 PM |
| Hey I recognize this one. This must be one of Peter/Philos31. Correct me if I'm wrong ;) Lovely shot, although I feel that her skin is a bit too soft. |
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06/06/2006 10:16:25 AM |
| very nice. love that i can see your reflection in her eyes. excellent recreation, definite iprovement. |
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06/06/2006 09:24:44 AM |
don't recall the original, but this looks fantastic and I hope you do well with this...
neat image? if it is, that's the only negative about this as the skin doesn't look natural...8 |
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06/06/2006 04:13:51 AM |
| Great expression, just spoiled a little by your reflection in her eyes which is distracting. |
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06/06/2006 12:11:08 AM |
| Nice eyes. Good skin tone. The DOF is good. Maybe a touch overdone on the Neat Image for my taste, but still a very nice portrait. |
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