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07/11/2006 08:05:59 AM |
| Its nice idea and good colors but objects feels too stiff arranged. I would try some more interesting angle. |
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07/11/2006 06:54:44 AM |
| The perspective is a bit skewed, as it appears that the objects could be stuck to a wooden wall... Nonetheless, the subject is depicted clearly and the photo is well-focused. It lacks something, but is germane to the challenge. |
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07/10/2006 12:11:20 PM |
| Nice shot, only neg comment is the wood grain showing in the background and the pencil could be a little more exposed. |
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07/09/2006 06:35:35 AM |
| Strange lighting, I think it's too dark, the bright yellow may not help. Items look as if they are floating above a desk. I don't think that's the effect you were going for. Shallow depth of field makes portions of the pen look out of focus. Pen would look better if it had more contrast, no bar code exposed, etc. Keep on dabbling with similar brights on darks, there is a winner to be had in the idea. |
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07/09/2006 06:18:15 AM |
| Cute title. The simplicity here makes this a good photo IMO. |
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07/07/2006 11:46:39 AM |
What I like: Very well exectuted. Yellow sticks out great!
What might improve it: Perhaps if the pen were in focus? |
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07/07/2006 11:42:02 AM |
| Good colors and composition. I would have liked a black background instead of the wood grain from the table it is sitting on, as it tends to draw my eyes away from the question mark. |
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07/06/2006 09:33:13 PM |
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07/06/2006 07:53:42 PM |
| Cute idea. The focus on the pen is a bit soft for my taste. |
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07/06/2006 07:47:03 AM |
| Wonderful yellow, it really shines amongst the other colors, would've liked a solid background though |
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07/06/2006 06:04:08 AM |
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07/06/2006 01:32:29 AM |
| I wish the pen was a little bit more in focus. 6 |
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07/06/2006 12:03:17 AM |
| I really like the post-it note with the question mark, but I'm not too sure about the pen (which kinda seems to be floating in black) and I definately am not a fan of the woodgrain as the background. |
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07/05/2006 06:46:56 PM |
I love the background softness, gives the pen the illusion of floating.
Nicely captured. |
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07/05/2006 01:08:58 AM |
| Simple, and to the point..... |
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