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11/06/2006 09:13:45 PM |
She is beautiful, but the lighting REALLY draws your attention to her eyebrows...which is not so good |
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11/05/2006 05:22:35 PM |
Very pretty model, but the lighting is coming very strong from the top of the head. A more even lighting might have a more pleasing affect. |
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11/04/2006 08:22:01 PM |
Nice portrait, but the shadows bother me just a tad on her face... |
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11/03/2006 11:57:00 PM |
A very raw looking photo! I like! |
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11/03/2006 08:15:32 PM |
Pretty model. I think the hot spots on her face are a bit too contrasty compared to the shadowed parts of her face. Her expression makes her look a bit uncomfortable. Her dark eyebrows also contrast heavily with the blonde hair. Dodging the eyes and lips, and burning the highlights/cloning in the more natural skin tone might help the image have more zing. Good luck in the challenge. |
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11/03/2006 08:49:45 AM |
really not sure about this. the light seems too bright on her temple, which distracts from alot of the picture. |
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11/02/2006 12:41:36 AM |
0 = Poor, 0.5 = Fair, 1= Good, 1.5 = Great, 2= Perfection
Creativity = 1
Composition = 1
Lighting = 0.5
Contrast = 1
Focus = 1.5
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Total Score = 5 |
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11/01/2006 07:44:00 PM |
I have a couple of issues here... the main one being the harsh light on her forehead. I also am not sure that I would include makeup - especially that dark in a tub... it doesn't give it a realistic feel because that would surely run. |
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11/01/2006 05:23:28 PM |
A touch to much light on the forehead otherwise a good study photo...6 |
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11/01/2006 01:21:19 PM |
love the eye makeup combined with the distorting angle of the face and the intense highlights. Creates a kind of melodramatic but surreal effect, like opera. But there's also a calligraphic sort of beauty to the lines. |
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11/01/2006 06:20:31 AM |
those are some eyebrows there... |
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