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03/03/2007 06:40:39 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
My first impression unfortunately is about the technicals. While I like grainy images this one doesn't quite work for me. It kinda looks like you cropped this very tightly and that's why it looks the way it does.
That aside the composition does do some good things. You made the best out of that background and you gave the subject some negative space. However for this challenge context is king and you didn't give your subject enough of a surrounding to better understand the moment. Her expression could be made more interesting if more was shown.
Lighting, contrast and b/w conversion are all good. |
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02/24/2007 08:46:09 AM |
| nice shot, but a little jittery |
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02/20/2007 11:45:34 PM |
| i recognize that border...it's e301's ;) what i get from this is that you're afraid to get close and shoot directly at people. zoom out and face your fear. |
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02/20/2007 11:14:22 PM |
| I love the accidental nobility of her expression at this moment... or maybe it's a real nobility you found that she herself might not recognize. 7 |
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02/20/2007 01:48:00 PM |
| appears to have a lot of noise |
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02/20/2007 10:17:24 AM |
| Looks over sharpened, otherwise a good shot. |
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02/20/2007 01:41:02 AM |
| Nice lighting but just seems a little un-sharp and not much interest to keep your eye. |
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02/19/2007 04:58:21 PM |
| Her face is blurred slightly. |
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02/19/2007 04:12:49 PM |
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02/19/2007 12:18:48 PM |
Great expression. I like the B&W here. I'd have take out the right side with the card labels, etc.
Image is a bit grainy for my taste: maybe a result of too much USM or cropping too much. |
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