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08/25/2002 05:09:00 PM |
| Good eye movement with this - skin, tatoo, pencil... |
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08/22/2002 05:52:00 PM |
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08/22/2002 04:30:00 PM |
| lovely exposure, quality shot 8 |
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08/21/2002 09:08:00 PM |
| Oh gosh, please don't take this the wrong way. The angle is good. It just kind of makes the model look like she has a really big butt. I know she doesn't cause she has such a slim waste, but the perspective makes it seem that way. I think that a more straight on shot of the back might have been a bit more flattering. Unless, of course, you were going for this look, then I'll leave it alone. It kind of looks like you are taking a photo of a pencil, but trying to show off the tattoo. You could reverse it, you could take a photo of the tattoo at a more direct angle, and have the pencil still in the pocket be visible, but kind of in the background. I like the tattoo, it gives the photo originality. Might have looked more natural if the model was wearing a half shirt, instead of scrunching up a full shirt. The lighting is beautiful, and the red belt gives this photo zing. Good luck with the challenge. |
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08/21/2002 04:22:00 PM |
| Unique and clever. Overall, eye catching, but try more dramatic lighting. |
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08/21/2002 12:46:00 PM |
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08/21/2002 10:57:00 AM |
| Nice use of props. Very 90's |
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08/20/2002 09:37:00 PM |
| your ideas are great, your work, even better... |
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08/20/2002 07:42:00 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing4,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
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08/20/2002 12:47:00 PM |
Interesting shot, lots of vibrant colours and shapes. I don't know that the viewpoint is very flattering to the subject, but I doubt flattery was the intention. The arms seem to be a little lost - coming in from strange angles. Perhaps one could have touched the left hip and been more connected to the foreground?
5, Kavey |
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08/20/2002 11:49:00 AM |
| Good composition, color and clarity |
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08/20/2002 09:03:00 AM |
| Ok, this is obviously a guy picture! Love the detail on the jeans, belt, etc... this one could have been used for the Texture challenge...lol. Pencil should have been a "Dixon Ticonderoga" though... |
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08/20/2002 12:35:00 AM |
| Very nice uh...pencil.. :) 7. |
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08/19/2002 11:52:00 PM |
| Doesn't do much for me. It reads like a snapshot. Sorry but that's just my own opinion. Journey |
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08/19/2002 09:49:00 PM |
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08/19/2002 06:43:00 PM |
| Very nice done, good shot, maybe a tad more focus. Love the tat!! Score 7 ~Kee |
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08/19/2002 06:27:00 PM |
| I'm a sucker for shapely women. 6 -lennier |
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08/19/2002 03:29:00 PM |
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08/19/2002 02:05:00 PM |
| good picture. the light seems to be shining a little to much on the pencil. Maybe ajusting the intensity of your flashor the angle would help./ |
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08/19/2002 02:48:00 AM |
| Everything is good in this picture except the pencil, to many hot spots and to little focus. |
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08/19/2002 02:10:00 AM |
| I hope the pencil didn't hurt when she sat down! Ouch. |
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