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Roll with the Flow
Roll with the Flow
bergiekat


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Challenge: Rhythm III (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 II
Location: My kitchen
Date: Jul 21, 2007
Galleries: Abstract, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Jul 22, 2007

 The rhythm section(grin)the middle necks and curve of those bottles is very much in focus. Most didn't take the time to look at that part, they concentrated on the labels (which I almost cropped out).

Look at the glass and the reflection in those two bottles if you care. I still like this shot!

Here are the others w/labels cropped out. and per someone's suggestion.


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Place: 124 out of 159
Avg (all users): 5.2661
Avg (commenters): 4.9286
Avg (participants): 4.9388
Avg (non-participants): 5.4800
Views since voting: 827
Views during voting: 193
Votes: 124
Comments: 15
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 08/19/2007 09:30:28 PM
I really like this shot. I do prefer the cropped version so that the focus remains on the necks of the bottles. The only negative I see in the photo is the reflection of the lights in th necks, it seems a bit harsh to me.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/29/2007 11:38:32 PM
Love the tones and your perspective really works here but it's very out of focus. You can eliminate this by using a tripod and or setting the camera on a steady surface while shooting. If you were going for a soft look in this photo I don't really see how it works here. Finally a little shift to straighten out the bottles so they are level would help this out a lot.
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 07/29/2007 11:21:08 PM
Really like the idea but I wish this were in focus with more detail.
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 07/29/2007 07:33:56 PM
Nice attempt, but it seems like you carelessly shook the camera while shooting. Painfully obvious on Shiraz...
 07/28/2007 09:24:25 AM
Too out of focus.
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 07/27/2007 09:21:46 PM
Seems out of focus (the letters on the bottles). Nice idea however.
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 07/26/2007 05:29:31 AM
seems a bit shaken
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 07/25/2007 11:35:10 PM
Outstanding work. Great rhythm, comp and tones. Looks like a painting.
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 07/25/2007 12:31:43 PM
I like this view but much more the sound of the cork coming out of the bottle :) The softness and OOF work good
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 07/23/2007 11:31:28 PM
You have an eye for the patterns created by the bottles, and the lights and darks add another layer of patterns as well. Unfortunately nothing can save this shot from the poor focus which it suffers from. Hopefully another challenge comes along which lets you explore this again, because I think if this were not suffering from so much blur it would really have a good impact, simple as it is.
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 07/23/2007 05:48:58 PM
Tricky low light. Nice attempt though. Like how you've composed.
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 07/23/2007 04:25:34 PM
A little OOF. Nice idea though.
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 07/23/2007 03:15:06 PM
Well done.
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 07/23/2007 05:14:12 AM
looks like you shook the camera during a long exposure. had also been better to have the bottles parallel to the frame IMO
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 07/23/2007 01:33:48 AM
Good concept re this rhythm challenge.....
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