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THE ORIGINAL CAPRICORN
THE ORIGINAL CAPRICORN
RUEDISCHMUTZ


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Challenge: Zodiac (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus C-730UZ
Location: BERN ANIMAL PARK
Date: Jan 24, 2004
Aperture: F4.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Jan 24, 2004

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Place: 19 out of 120
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02/09/2004 09:59:01 PM
*Greeting from the Critique Club*

Excellent Shot!

Composition:
Very nicely composed picture! I am going to re-iterate what other commentors have stated because I believe they are quite correct, this would be a near-perfect shot if all of the horns were in the shot. In my opinion, the horns are the main focus of the shot because they are the most interesting, with that being said, it would be imperative to have all of them there. Other than than, it is a very nicely composed photo that is very pleasing to look at.

Focus:
Again, I would have to agree with those who have already commented, I do believe that blurring the background would enhance this shot in ways you wouldn't believe. This can be done several different ways, one is to have a higher F-Stop setting on the aperature (smaller aperature), and to adjust your focal length. Blurring the background helps the main subject "pop out" of the shot more. May I add though that your focus is absolutelyu stellar in this shot, very nicely done! The amount of detail (especially on the horns) is staggering. I love it!

Overall:

Very nicely done. The only things that would make this already strong picture solid would be those two small things I mentioned. A few small things though can make the difference between a really good shot and a WOW shot.

Good luck on future challenges! I really enjoy this shot a lot!

~Matthew (goinskiing)

If you have any comments, questions, or soncerns, feel free to PM me!
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/03/2004 05:07:42 AM
If only the top of the horns hadn't been cut off this would have been an excellent shot.
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02/02/2004 02:57:53 PM
Missed the tops of his rams.
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02/01/2004 12:42:43 PM
I wonder if this would have been even better in landscape, so that the entire pair of horns were included?
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01/31/2004 01:12:22 AM
The magnificant horns were cropped far too much for my liking, otherwise a very nice photo.
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01/29/2004 06:55:52 PM
Awsome horns. NIce details and color on the goat. I wish the background was even more out of focus, so the goat would stand out even more.
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01/29/2004 06:32:36 PM
Very good and I like it a lot.
01/29/2004 06:05:52 PM
Great shot, one of my favorites so far.
01/29/2004 02:05:03 AM
Nice exposure and colors. IMO the crop at the top and right is too tight. A larger aperture may have blurred the background more to separate from the subject. The details on the subject are clear and crisp.
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01/28/2004 07:56:37 PM
I would like to see the entire set of horns in the picture... other than that, it is a great capture. Nice colors.
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01/28/2004 01:24:06 PM
A good siign!
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01/28/2004 11:33:12 AM
lovely clarity
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01/28/2004 10:38:01 AM
The horns are great...nice shot.
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01/28/2004 02:03:57 AM
It would have been better if the horns were not cropped from the top
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01/28/2004 02:00:28 AM
Holy smokes that has to be heavy!
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01/28/2004 12:10:07 AM
this is a really good shot! maybe if you could see all of his horns would be a touch better, otherwise great job overall!
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