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09/23/2002 04:48:00 PM |
This was the first conception I ever thought of when the Challenge topic was announced. I originally thought of using a tree with a diagonal leaf-line. I then used a suburban house with red tiled roof. But I was happiest with this.
The idea was to equally balance positive and negative space; to have them almost reversible in some way. A secondary thought was "window on the sky."
Since the challenge began, the ealier picture (//www.dpchallenge.com/image.asp?IMAGE_ID=3254) has been mentioned to me several times. I prefer chariot's picture as a photograph, but I prefer mine as an exemplar of negative space.
Many thanks for the kind comments. |
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09/22/2002 02:01:00 PM |
Nice composition. The diagonals are very effective. I also like the colouring. I don't know if you were aware of it when submitting the photo but there was a very similar photo in the "Free Study" challenge: //www.dpchallenge.com/image.asp?IMAGE_ID=3254
I score your photo on it's own merits but I think the other one is even better because of the dramatic sky. Also your photo seems to have some problems with JPEG compression (artefacts). -stephan |
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09/22/2002 09:43:00 AM |
| Nice angles ... from corner to corner. |
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09/21/2002 11:59:00 AM |
Such a simple composition and very striking. Both abstract and recognisable at the same time.
7, Kavey |
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09/21/2002 11:54:00 AM |
| needs an open window :) good 'pattern' shot |
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09/21/2002 02:11:00 AM |
| Kinda a cool building. I like the contrast between the two blues. It looks like the site put speckles on the picture or something. If you ran a despeckle on it it may clear it up some. 6 |
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09/20/2002 05:39:00 PM |
| I seem to remember a similar shot, in BW with clouds, in another challenge. Looks like there are some compression artifacts, and the file's only 48 kb |
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09/20/2002 02:52:00 PM |
| I am afraid the contrast between sky and building is not great enough tof ully express this good idea. |
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09/19/2002 04:43:00 PM |
that's funny. this is an almost exact replica of an image I posted on this site.
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.asp?IMAGE_ID=3254 |
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09/19/2002 09:49:00 AM |
| I like this as a study in color/texture - excellent cropping/composition. |
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09/18/2002 05:39:00 AM |
| I'm a sucker for lines... I like the diagonal across the screen. nice touch |
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09/16/2002 06:14:00 PM |
| nice use of - space. I like the simetry :) |
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09/16/2002 06:03:00 PM |
| I like this. I believe that this could go both ways. if the subject is the building, then the sky is neg. space. if the building is the subject, then the sky is neg space. however, either way, the neg. space is very clear here. no mistaking it. I love the symetry. lighting, angle, framing and focus are all very nice. overall really nice photo. good luck in the challenge. ~hbunch7187~ |
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09/16/2002 05:18:00 PM |
| this looks familiar :) it also give me the optical illusion that the image is tilted to the left? do you notice that? - jmsetzler |
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09/16/2002 03:34:00 PM |
| I really like the corner to corner composition. Definitely meets the challenge IMO. Doesn't engage my interest otherwise. lhall-6 |
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09/16/2002 12:52:00 PM |
| neat. I like the angle and sky color. it might be a bit dark. that is it. good job. cmcvety. |
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09/16/2002 11:19:00 AM |
Nice composition and color (more comments later) 7
Ruthann |
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09/16/2002 08:58:00 AM |
| Symmetrical negative space! I like! |
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09/16/2002 04:59:00 AM |
Composition: Well done 7
Lighting: good 6,
Appeal: 7, Total Rating 8 Sulamk
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09/16/2002 03:54:00 AM |
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09/16/2002 02:24:00 AM |
| subtle blues, architectural cross hatch and perfect diagonal horizon........ a hard edged negative space beauty |
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09/16/2002 01:01:00 AM |
| Interesting photo. I liked the way the blue colors turned out. |
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