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09/23/2002 10:38:00 AM |
Congrats karmat!!!! Great work! |
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09/22/2002 11:30:00 PM |
For being a set up shot, I think the leveling could be better. Ther is a very strong horizontal line, and it's making a bit of a left turn. Overall though, the photo is very nice. I do like it a lot, and the use of neg. space is clear, and very good. 8 good luck in the challenge. ~hbunch7187~ |
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09/22/2002 11:00:00 PM |
Seems like an obvious idea when someone else thinks of it...well conceived and well executed. |
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09/22/2002 10:53:00 PM |
Very well composed, though I would've had your model clench a bit harder to show struggle. |
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09/22/2002 04:45:00 PM |
A perfect concept, Simple, Artsy, a masterful work of art. - good luck - Gotcha |
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09/22/2002 04:03:00 PM |
The black and white contrast is a great effect, nice job! |
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09/22/2002 03:06:00 AM |
Nice shot. I like the contrast in this one. 7 |
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09/21/2002 12:19:00 PM |
I like this simple image a lot. It's a great rule of thirds example and yet still original and punchy. 7, Kavey |
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09/20/2002 02:40:00 PM |
cute! Good luck in the challenge. Grayce aka Gracious |
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09/20/2002 12:34:00 PM |
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09/20/2002 06:57:00 AM |
To me, this photo poses a friendly debate over which of the spaces is the negative space. It's the debate that keeps me interested, after the initial grin at this poor soul clinging to the edge. I would have preferred a perfectly even white area (the line is a tiny bit crooked), but the general composition is right on. Good lighting (maybe a bit more contrast?) and good use of negative space up top ... it weighs down on top of the fingers. 8 |
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09/19/2002 11:27:00 PM |
Wonderful division of space. |
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09/19/2002 09:15:00 PM |
Very original. I like the composition. ... makes you wonder what is behind the person hanging on. 8 |
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09/19/2002 02:01:00 PM |
Interesting :) This is definitely a unique interpretation of the challenge... The focus on the fingers is a tad soft for my taste, and the flash appears to have washed out some of the finer detail in the fingers.
Meets Challenge: 10 Technical Merit: 4 Artistic Merit: 5 Creative Merit: 7 WOW Factor: 5
Score: 6 - JMSetzler |
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09/19/2002 10:48:00 AM |
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09/19/2002 10:21:00 AM |
What can i say??? I love this..awesome clean lines...contrast...use of negative space...great idea! Lisa |
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09/19/2002 09:58:00 AM |
Very clever - really jumps out at you! I wish there was no thin grey line around our photos when they are displayed for us to judge - yours would otherwise be even more powerful, I think! - not your fault, I know! :) I do like the use of neg space here - a good example of where a single color is more effective in a negative space than a texture or other treatment. |
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09/19/2002 01:33:00 AM |
Defines the concept of the topic.... besides it gives us the Whole grayscale on 3 elements.... Clear and Precise... I like it a lot Victor R Ojeda |
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09/18/2002 08:36:00 PM |
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09/18/2002 08:35:00 PM |
Not only does the image use negative space to show the image, the hand comes out of negative space itself. A douple meaning negative space--gets my 10 for this alone although it is not necessarily the most pleasing image to look at. |
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09/18/2002 05:48:00 PM |
Well done - I like the contrast between black and white! |
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09/18/2002 11:15:00 AM |
Good image, it really looks like someone is holding on for dear life, good use of negative space |
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09/17/2002 11:50:00 AM |
Great idea! Would love to see a more homogenous tone across the white area. 8 |
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09/17/2002 06:43:00 AM |
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09/16/2002 11:40:00 PM |
great image. good use of negative space. the hand seems a bit out of focus, but barely noticable. cmcvety. |
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09/16/2002 11:36:00 PM |
I like. Something I would buy. Nice! - bamaster (8) |
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09/16/2002 10:24:00 PM |
I like this. It is almost a bit startling. Very unique . |
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09/16/2002 08:02:00 PM |
Simply Great! I would like to see the white edge evened out, other than that 9. |
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09/16/2002 07:35:00 PM |
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09/16/2002 04:35:00 PM |
Very good! I like the contrast between the black and white |
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09/16/2002 02:07:00 PM |
I wish I could see more stress on the fingers... as if they were really hanging on. Right now it looks like they are just resting. |
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09/16/2002 12:34:00 PM |
Another of these well taken shots, good framing etc, but ultimately my feeling is: Whats the point? Theres nothing really to hold any interest, nothing really being shown to me. |
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09/16/2002 11:11:00 AM |
Excellent!!! Nice contrast and composition (I almost detect that the 'line' is uneven - could be me). I like this very much - grrrreat work 10 Ruthann (update) Neg Space: Does it make a difference? yes |
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09/16/2002 11:00:00 AM |
Clever, Creative. Good b&w. Score 8 Justine |
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09/16/2002 09:02:00 AM |
Composition: Good 6 Lighting: 5 Appeal:6, Total Rating6 Sulamk
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09/16/2002 09:02:00 AM |
classical yin and yang ......... I can hear the sound of one hand clapping. |
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09/16/2002 12:57:00 AM |
This is a good use of negative space and it is an interesting photo. Well-done! |
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