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Turkey & Spinach Roll Up
Turkey & Spinach Roll Up
shamer


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Healthy Food (Basic Editing)
Camera: Pentax K10D
Lens: Pentax FA 31mm f/1.8 AL Limited AF
Date: Apr 29, 2008
Date Uploaded: Apr 29, 2008

 Yeah, this sucked. I was in a hurry & threw this together just minutes before the deadline ended which was stupid (this was actually my lunch for the next day & in that regard was a great success). The lighting is crap & the image is waaaay too busy - I honestly don't know what compelled me to submit this! Another lesson learned...

Statistics
Place: 39 out of 109
Avg (all users): 5.6931
Avg (commenters): 5.7143
Avg (participants): 5.6512
Avg (non-participants): 5.7009
Views since voting: 1418
Views during voting: 406
Votes: 277
Comments: 17
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AuthorThread
 05/07/2008 12:42:13 AM
Thanks for all the comments :)

Message edited by author 2008-05-24 13:26:08.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/04/2008 06:42:30 PM
it's o.k. I wish the whole plate were in focus since the cucumbers adn oranges seem like part of the subject, not just the end of the roll-up.
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 05/03/2008 10:18:41 PM
Great job with the challenge.
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 05/01/2008 07:54:28 PM
I think this is nice, but I'd like to see it on a plainer plate.
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 05/01/2008 11:56:42 AM
If the roll up was the main component I would rather it was in sharp focus than the melon.
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 04/30/2008 09:25:48 PM
Personally, I am not a big veggie fan, but your image looks really good. I like the composition, lighting and colors.
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 04/30/2008 05:22:45 PM
Could definitely use a color bump, but it looks like a nice composition.
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 04/30/2008 01:52:05 PM
stunningly vibrant colors and composition is very good. i wish you had used a plain or simple(only with border) plate though. busy-colorful-printed plate competes with the food for attention.
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 04/30/2008 01:37:10 PM
A nice pleasing arrangement. DOF is good. I think I'd like a bit more lighting on the front, but overall well done. Good luck!
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 04/30/2008 01:03:46 PM
lacks a bit of contrast, still looks appetizing. good crop and DOF
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 04/30/2008 10:16:50 AM
love the composition and the way each peice of food is perfectly placed..good job
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 04/30/2008 09:57:29 AM
Nice presentation and well taken.
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 04/30/2008 08:35:26 AM
Nicely done and well composed. My only nit is there's more light on the rear of the plate than in the front and that makes for an unbalanced image.

Why am I hungry now? mmm
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 04/30/2008 08:35:14 AM
DOF too narrow for me.
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 04/30/2008 01:05:40 AM
this is a really good looking meal. Composition and colors are also good. The plate (color and pattern) distracts to me
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 04/30/2008 12:19:55 AM
the colors aren't looking that great to me, also the plate is too busy and is taking away from the food itself
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 04/30/2008 12:19:28 AM
looks refreshing...lighting looks a little flat
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