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10/12/2008 09:32:06 PM |
a very good set up and beautiful model ... I would like to see levels and contrast up a bit to get the image to POP
try tweaking in post |
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10/12/2008 07:04:22 PM |
| pretty model and nice idea here - i just wish she were illuminated a bit better |
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10/12/2008 06:29:03 PM |
| Lovely shot, but that branch that parallels her spine really bugs me the more I look at the photo. Still a strong shot. |
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10/12/2008 04:26:02 PM |
| I don't like the perspective on this image. And snow white fell asleep after biting the apple, so your model's eyes should be closed... |
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10/11/2008 06:18:10 PM |
| very good concept, love POVs like this, but I'd like to see the hand open a little more and relaxed, a half-closed eye, and that branch near her head moved! |
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10/11/2008 11:06:21 AM |
| I like the idea, but the lighting seems a bit flat. I like the DOF too. |
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10/10/2008 03:15:32 PM |
| Good model for Snow White, although I may have selected a pastel of lighter color for the dress. Her face is OOF but not by much. A much shallower DOF and positioning her hand a little closer to the camera would have been more effective IMO. Image feels a little flat like it could use a boost in contrast and a tweak in levels. All JMO of course. :-) Good luck in the challenge. |
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10/09/2008 03:00:33 PM |
| closed eyes would've been better... and lighting seems a bit flat? |
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10/09/2008 01:08:34 AM |
| Lacking a little sharpness, not a correct period dress, and the stick on the right is distracting, but otherwise well done. |
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10/08/2008 10:43:53 AM |
| Nice model for this title |
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10/08/2008 10:00:34 AM |
| Great idea but a little flat. If you darkened the background it might have been more dynamic. |
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10/08/2008 07:44:37 AM |
| The contrast is a little flat, but I really like this picture. |
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10/07/2008 07:33:33 PM |
| I love the viewpoint. Good shot. |
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10/06/2008 07:45:16 PM |
| Good pose and setting, would've liked to be a wee bit closer to her, instead of there being so much foreground. The light is nice. |
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10/06/2008 07:06:06 PM |
| Nice shot. Could use some more contrast and maybe some burning around the edges. I would have also removed the stick by her head for a cleaner composition. 6 |
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10/06/2008 03:11:18 PM |
| Like the DOF in this, stronger colors on the foreground/Background would help.. |
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10/06/2008 10:52:05 AM |
her face is out of focus
and the apple would look
if it was a lot more red
to highlight the snow white
theme. |
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