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Challenge: Stars (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS
Location: Goleta, CA
Date: Dec 11, 2008
Aperture: 9
ISO: 100
Shutter: 2.5
Galleries: Seascapes, Astrophotography
Date Uploaded: Dec 11, 2008

I was shooting this beautiful sunset at the beach by my house when Venus just popped out from behind the passing clouds at the perfect time. So I guess it's not technically a star, but hey it's close enough. Tweaked levels, contrast, saturation, etc in PSCS.

Statistics
Place: 36 out of 87
Avg (all users): 5.6452
Avg (commenters): 6.6316
Avg (participants): 5.4545
Avg (non-participants): 5.7207
Views since voting: 974
Views during voting: 374
Votes: 155
Comments: 20
Favorites: 1 (view)


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12/24/2008 11:12:31 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6 or 7.

Wow, what a georgeous photograph. I'm dissapointed it didn't score higher. Just stunning. I love all the busy-ness in the sky and in the water. The colours are wonderful, and the bright white star does stand out well against the blue sky. I'm guessing the reason it didn't finish higher was because either the star was missed by many, or they felt it was not a strong enough element in an otherwise beautiful photo.

Great shot and keep up the good work.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/21/2008 03:55:40 PM
Major points for subtlety, LOL...
12/21/2008 01:21:59 PM
Beautiful shot AND yes, there is a star... just made it... 7 for subtle
12/21/2008 10:42:40 AM
Subtle but very nice.
12/20/2008 10:07:09 PM
I put my pointer on that ship (I think it is) and wanted to zoom in LOL
12/20/2008 10:43:00 AM
At first, I wanted to vote this down. Like the sunset challenge that the winners seems focused on the seascape rather then the actual sunset, this photo looks like a photo of a sunset rather then stars. Like those 'Sunset' photo, this is excellent too. The 'Fist Star' brings it into the challenge more but what really captures my interest is that it really looks like there's a HUGE star floating on the horizon. So, I'm going with a 10 for this one.
12/20/2008 12:18:24 AM
This is a nice shot with some great colours and general good exposure. One thing that is very distracting is the object two thirds along the horizon. I can't make out what it is, which is just annoying and takes away from an otherwise good shot.

As far as meeting the challenge, I appreciate there is a star, but it feels more like "squeezing it in" to make it fit :)
12/19/2008 07:19:21 PM
wow nice shot
12/19/2008 03:25:45 PM
What's neat about this is when it opens, probably helped just a bit by the title, the first thing I see *is* the star. Lovely shot.
12/19/2008 08:36:26 AM
is that a boat in the background? I love the long exposure you used for the foreground
12/17/2008 04:31:43 PM
Well, it's a planet, but still a great photo. I love the clouds and sunset coloring. Is that a boat, buoy or oil derrick on the horizon? I'm surprised at the bright yellow of it, and it really draws my attention.
12/17/2008 11:56:46 AM
nice subtle image to convey that old familiar saying
12/16/2008 03:42:53 PM
extremely pretty picture - totally beautiful, but i would have liked to have seen more stars... the one ickle star on its own seems a bit lost.
12/16/2008 12:22:46 PM
Is that an oil rig out there?
12/16/2008 12:22:21 PM
Nice colors...
12/16/2008 05:27:21 AM
Just gorgeous seascape. Nice job on the one star, too. Bumping up on final review. (10)
12/15/2008 03:23:54 PM
I'm glad you had your title - it took me a while to see that it was on brief. However, star or no star - it's a great shot.
12/15/2008 11:01:28 AM
Is that a star or a planet? LOL Just kidding. A beautiful photo, but that yellow thing on the horizon is distracting - I'm trying to figure out what it is. An oil rig maybe?
12/15/2008 02:49:27 AM
very subtle - I really had to look around for it!
12/15/2008 01:12:45 AM
not sure what that is on the horison, but i loved looking for that little star! very well done.


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