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04/19/2009 11:08:56 AM |
I gave this a 10, one of the best of the challenge, IMO! So well done! |
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04/18/2009 11:20:52 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this is a very strong shot. The city in the background and the bridge make a nice balanced composition. However, it does feel ever so slightly tilted to the right. I know part of it is a perspective thing -- it would be difficult to get the background straight without making the bridge look weird, but the verticals on the bridge look a bit slanted as well. I do find myself wanting just a bit more "stuff" on the right, but overall, nicely done.
Technically, the exposure, focus and colors on this are very well done, very attractive, and very pleasant to look at.
The script you have chosen works very well.
Overall, a great shot (one of my higher scorers) and definitely one you can be proud of.
Karma |
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04/13/2009 12:54:04 AM |
This is a great shot. well done! |
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04/12/2009 11:30:04 PM |
Very nice, love those star bursts. |
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04/10/2009 12:23:04 PM |
The square crop makes it not a classic post card, to my mind, but the photo is great. |
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04/10/2009 07:27:14 AM |
Your vertical is off just a bit. Very pretty otherwise. |
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04/09/2009 06:45:05 PM |
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04/09/2009 11:41:58 AM |
Not voting, only commenting:
Very nicely exposed, although your horizon could use come straightening, and the dark area bottom left detracts a bit. |
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04/08/2009 10:54:19 AM |
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04/07/2009 09:55:42 PM |
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04/07/2009 01:34:37 AM |
awesome capture with good image depth through an awesome composition |
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04/06/2009 11:00:53 PM |
Fabulous shot.... Makes me want to stand where you were and see it for myself... |
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04/06/2009 10:18:01 PM |
A very nice capture from Presidio and is very representative of San Francisco in general. The font and it's treatment is perfect and matches the overall feeling of the image. The highlights are perfectly on the edge and compliment the image. Well done. |
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04/06/2009 08:25:22 PM |
Very popular composition, I recall a similar image in the last Postcard challenge, if it works it works! Nice shot, tones excellent in Bridge's tower. |
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04/06/2009 07:35:06 PM |
No vote , just commenting. Beautiful shot , Wish you had adjusted the verticals , they are a little off. |
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04/06/2009 06:00:17 PM |
Very well done. Originally a 7 but after further review it's a nice 8. Love the silouhette of the mountain on the left bottom corner. Gives it a nice contrast. |
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04/06/2009 06:00:05 PM |
Looks like the picture is tilted down to the right. Sky looks a bit hazy. |
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04/06/2009 09:48:00 AM |
This is classic. Love the light flares. Sure looks like a postcard you'd see at a tourist stand. :~) |
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04/06/2009 09:25:39 AM |
Really pretty and nice perspective. |
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04/06/2009 02:50:19 AM |
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04/06/2009 01:47:22 AM |
Whoops on the title, great small aperture shot though, 8 from me, well done. |
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04/06/2009 12:07:33 AM |
I really like the lights in this...good luck, just don't beat me! :) 9 |
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