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06/20/2009 01:41:59 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: Wish I'd taken it. Lovely, and would have been an easy 9 from me in voting.
Technical: Great use of ambient light, pov works beautifully, comp could arguably be seen as a little centred but this kind of shot calls for it. Wonderful use of negative space. PP seems to be just fine.
Artistic: Actually another glance at the top part of pic reveals a slight list to the right, which enhances the sensation of vertigo. Like the way the sky seems to form a giant '1'.
FWIW/Overall: the only change I'd make would be one pass with sharpen edges, after unsharp mask, just to give the tops of the buildings just that little more sharpness.
Very good shot, you just finished out of the ribbons but in the top 10, and here that is nothing to sneeze at!
Feel free to PM me with any questions,
Susan |
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06/16/2009 10:32:11 PM |
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06/16/2009 12:23:35 PM |
Nice perspective... IMO, the shadow & highlights adjustment is overdone, that leads to lack of contrast..... Raj |
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06/14/2009 09:22:11 PM |
Exposure is perfect. Very abstract. I wonder how it would look in BW. |
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06/14/2009 10:33:59 AM |
A ten from me. I'll be surprised if most folks don't think so. GOod stuff. Congrats. (voted earlier, now back to comment) |
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06/12/2009 01:24:36 PM |
a little more contrast would give this more oomph but pleasing just the same |
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06/12/2009 09:21:28 AM |
This is spectacular !!! Ten !!! |
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06/12/2009 01:22:04 AM |
A little levels adjustments would make this really pop, very nice |
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06/11/2009 09:32:21 PM |
Very nice shot. Looks like a puzzle, and I like how the buildings form a border all the way around. |
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06/11/2009 06:15:03 AM |
Crazy lines, love it. Like that the focus is crisp. Nice capture of the reflections too. Great image. |
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06/10/2009 04:38:41 PM |
you win my tie-breaker among 8 images that I gave a 9 to. 10!! |
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