Certainly meets the challenge, and follows the 'rules' - main subect not centre-frame, horizon not centre-frame. In simple terms of those rules, however, you've placed the rusted thing too far off-centre - I'd have allowed more room for it to breathe in the composition, brought it if you like onto the conjunction of the thirds lines, rather than in the bottom right box created by those lines.
However, all of that is incidental to the fact that the light is all wrong - very harsh, very contrasty, and giving you little help with the definition of these things, nor of the distance of the composition. There do seem to be textures in the metal plates worthy of interest, but this does little to show the detail of them. There's also a great deal of distracting detail in the shot, at least that adds little to my viewing of it: stones in the sand, other lumps and metal things around, the confusion of posts, people and the boat - which are not necessarily bad things, depending on your intention and organisation of those things, but for dpc they most definitely are. 4 |
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