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07/12/2010 06:18:40 PM |
| Ahh, good ol' black spaghetti, as my bro-in-law calls it. Good capture but you need more of a focal point. The D90 is capable of many great things! Use it well! :-) |
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10/06/2009 08:13:06 AM |
| Yep, and it's not pretty at home either. :-) You've certainly met the challenge theme of twisted / curved lines, but quite honestly, the photo is underwhelming from a viewing standpoint. Also, why not use the full 640 pixels? You only used 500 on the long side. |
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10/03/2009 02:13:42 PM |
| How did you get a picture of my computer area? |
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10/02/2009 10:17:03 PM |
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10/01/2009 03:12:24 PM |
| Yep, that indeed is something we all have. Most of my piles that look like that are in a box in the basement - I'm tempted to give them away without looking inside! Meets the challenge but rather blah in the approach with the straight overhead, harsh light bit. Maybe a shot from down low, looking across, with lower light to create a sense of a twisted jungle, for instance? |
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09/30/2009 08:09:34 PM |
Not coming off too well with this entry, I'm afraid. I do like the idea, though. I can, however, offer some suggestions that could have helped it.
-Lighting appears to be uninteresting forward facing, possibly onboard flash. Lighting from the side somehow may have added dimension.
-Colors appear flat. Some levels and/or curves adjustment can stretch the dynamic range and help fix that aspect.
-Nothing in particular draws my eye. It is indeed a tangles mess of wires, but some eye leading composition is still possible to do.
Hope this helped. |
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09/30/2009 10:36:29 AM |
*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread* I like the idea of this. I think it would look less snapshotish if it had a nicer bg then the cardboard. I also think they could have been arranged in an eye pleasing way and still represented the tangled mess scenario we all know too well.
HTH |
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