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Librodo Revisited
markwiley


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Challenge: Take Two II (Advanced Editing VII*)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-550D Rebel T2i
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: By the basement window
Date: Jun 22, 2011
Aperture: 2
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jun 23, 2011

 Same model (my daughter), same fabric, same location (by the basement window). The good news is I think this is a substantial improvement over my original Librodo entry. The bad news is there is still so much room to improve. But, it has only been a few months, right? At this rate in a couple of years I should be able to get a pretty good picture.

There are things I would change about the composition if I could reshoot it. There are things I would have liked to do in processing that I have not figured out how to do yet. However, given my time, talent and experience to this point, this will have to do.

Take one:

Place: 48 out of 93
Avg (all users): 5.6332

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Place: 25 out of 74
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AuthorThread
 07/01/2011 12:07:21 AM
Thanks for the comments

Message edited by author 2011-07-01 08:22:32.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/30/2011 08:16:41 PM
Librodo?
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 06/30/2011 05:13:16 PM
beautiful model, beautiful picture, love the softness
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/29/2011 09:16:30 PM
A very sweet image and, if I spotted correctly, certainly an improvement from your first take. My only observation here is that the veil is covering just part of her left eye. I think it should cover the whole eye to avoid any distraction.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/28/2011 11:57:14 PM
Very pretty. Love the soft light.
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 06/26/2011 05:15:13 PM
Very pretty photo. I'm still not sure how I feel about an eye covered up. I know to some it adds a sense of mystery, but to me it takes away half of the most important feature to a woman's face.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/26/2011 10:08:17 AM
That's really nice 8.
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 06/24/2011 08:46:47 AM
Technically good. Her expression seems a tad forced. I wonder what it would have looked like if we were able to see both of her eyes. Great catch light. :)
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 06/24/2011 12:17:24 AM
Gorgeous, she has pretty eyes.
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