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08/17/2004 07:23:39 PM |
too bright, it almost hurts my eyes to look at it |
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08/15/2004 08:51:04 PM |
Whoa - a whole load of vanishing points. The overexposed white area is really distracting. It would help if you used more of the 150k file size allowed. |
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08/13/2004 01:15:17 PM |
I seem to be in the middle of a string of crazy abstract shots. There's a simplicity I like here - and a true abstraction - but there are things that suggest laziness of intent and execution that I don't like. The closet thing we have to a horizon, that line that interrupts the flare most, seems rather randomly placed: I would see it horizontal, or further away from that; this hints at a real world, but doesn't remove the idea enough to have impact and so looks un-thought-out. The fade of the colour at frame's edge into that beige nothing kind of shade also seems somehwt without effect (other than to make the suggestion of lacking care). My immediate feeling, and some time does not change this much, is of an uninvolving shot ... disinterest. 3 |
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08/12/2004 01:15:25 PM |
There seems to be a lot of noise, making this look more like a video capture than a photo. |
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08/12/2004 04:08:06 AM |
Cool concept, cool colours. The border helps too |
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08/11/2004 11:43:07 PM |
I am not really sure what this is. It would have done well in the neon challenge. sorry. |
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08/11/2004 02:52:47 PM |
A little smaller hole for light to enter might help :D |
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08/11/2004 02:19:44 AM |
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