Library Journal -- Berkeley Main Reborn
by GeneralE

Comment:
Blue sky would've helped this pic a lot. I think it would've provided a bit more contrast with this building.

Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
by hughletheren

Comment:
I used to have highlighters like that. I thought they came from Japan though. I've never seen another like it. This photo needs to be a little less flat and have a little more "wow"factor in it.

Holdin' It All Together
by karmat

Comment:
Good sharp clear pic. I don't like the lines between the 2 groups of paperclips particularly. COlors are well portrayed in this pic.

My keyboard
by Crafty Sue

Comment:
I'm looking at one of these right now. So I'm thinking I don't need a picture of it too. The keyboard is enough. This is awful bright too...

Exclamation point
by pinback

Comment:
Good sharp clear picture. Just doesn't have the visual impact that I'd like to see

deskyline
by kenbo

Comment:
This is a nice idea. One of the better photos of the challenge. I like the silhouette of the "flower" but don't really care for this stuff here on the left. I think it might have been a little better with something a little more recognizable.

Erupting Paper Clips
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
The roll of tape is not really helping things in the picture. This might have been better if you didn't show the bottom of the cup, or the bottom of the screen behind it. You really lose the illusion of the paperclips in motion knowing that the screen is immediately behind the cup. If we couldn't see that at the bottom, it would be a better sell. Its a good idea, and this picture would've worked if you cropped off the bottom. I know why you didn't (the paperclips on the table), but I think weighing out the pluses and minuses, it would've been more conducive to cut it off

Stress management
by tommy_t

Comment:
This one needs some real breathing room. The crop is just too tight. I like the idea. Someone here at work actually has a set the same or similar to this. The reflections are good too. This shot definitely works, except that it needs a little more room.

Peaks
by jgal76

Comment:
Just a little bit soft on this shot. It's really close to being real sharp, but doesn't quite have it

The Virtual Office
by Toddh

Comment:
Good tonal qualities and a very nice crisp clear shot. Not wild about the subject choices. But to each his own...