Through the Keyhole
by DougPaz

Comment:
good lighting on the subject

Hidden look
by spaque99

Comment:
nice capture

breaktime
by petrakka

Comment:
good framing, I like the way her hair is captured floating, gives a sense of motion.
some critique, I would have loved to see some more texture on the ball, it kind of makes the whole picture dull at this time.

...Some day my prince will come...
by doctornick

Comment:
Thats an amazing work
the expression is great..its really says she's looking forward to something , hoping for something new.. very well done

A bottle in the wall ...
by empaulo

Comment:
Golden gate.. hmm i know its always so foggy, You get a clear sky only ifyou are lucky :>

He's point of view
by faithriko

Comment:
A little more DOF would have helped
Funny shot :)

Wood Elf
by kosmikkreeper

Comment:
Good composition...I like the little pointy ears
the lighting is nice and the use of soft focus works well for this fairy tales challenge.

Secret Garden
by mrorange002

Comment:
Thats a really nice one.. i love the expression on the model's face.
Very well done.

Wood you get to the point.
by lyta

Comment:
hey Lita,
I like this picture, the angle that you chose and the texture and clarity. But this needs a little more DOF IMO, also give a little more space for the lines to merge a little ( the crop it too tight ). I don't know if F8 is the min. aperture your camera supports, but this might look better with a lesser aperture and if you showed the expanse more.
Also try to focus on nearly 1/3rd distance away from you keeping a low aperture, that might help increase your overall depth of field.
You can also try to convert this to b/w using channel mixer and get a more vibrant picture. the textures might get more prominent with a b/w conversion.
cheers,
KG

Message edited by author 2004-08-30 16:54:17.

Hope springs eternal
by lyta

Comment:
Its not very clear from the photo what you were trying to show and I need to read the title to understand anything about it ( and relate how it meets the challenge ).
The glare on the subject is distracting. IMO the presentation is neither attractive nor intriguing...
I know I have criticized you a lot but this is my most honest opinion...
At my screen it looks a lot brighter, you might like to play with curves a little and saturate the green a bit to add contrast.