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| 07/11/2006 05:42:45 PM |
Rock Paper CDby MazkaComment: I like the idea, and I like the juxtaposition of old and new "stationery." Definitely way outside the box, but that's okay with me.
However, there's not enough "pop" - needs more contrast. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:41:50 PM |
Life Unfinishedby LucidLotusComment: Think about your "story." What were you trying to convey here? The pages look filled, so the title doesn't resonate with me. And I don't seem to find a particular subject.
Finally, on the technical side, the contrast needs to be higher. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:40:33 PM |
Stationary Bike Stationeryby tfarrell23Comment: Heh. Nice composition and the pencil really drives my eye toward the corner of the paper.
What's the purpose of the phone? I was expecting a title like "Order Now!" |
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| 07/11/2006 05:39:41 PM |
Breakfast in Bedby sabrizzComment: Better lighting would improve this shot. You've got nice, interesting subjects, and I can tell there are bright colors in there. But it needs more contrast and more light. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:39:02 PM |
Paper airplaneby pinbokeshattaComment: This would work better with the whole plan in focus, and a brightly colored and lit piece of paper. White on white doesn't grab my eye. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:38:23 PM |
Dear Godby ibkcComment: The white paper kind of gets lost. I like the composition overall, but maybe a brightly colored note would work better? |
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| 07/11/2006 05:37:36 PM |
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| 07/11/2006 05:37:25 PM |
I WAS THERE!!by Car54Comment: Nice idea. :)
I lost the postcard in the background, though. If you can, try reshooting it with the postcard against the plain sky or against a darker building, but not across building boundaries. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:36:27 PM |
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| 07/11/2006 05:35:02 PM |
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