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| 07/28/2008 01:44:56 PM |
Toronto; Handle with Care. (Single shot, No Editing)by Shutter-For-HireComment: Woah, cool idea. I get that it was a single shot and all, but if you could have possibly found a way to get that box in focus as well, this would have been a winner. That and reducing that shadow would help.
Why didn't you edit this? It could have been improved greatly I think.
Still, 7 for it as is. |
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| 07/28/2008 01:41:31 PM |
Pinhole Cameraby pointandshootComment: Very cool idea. Not the best PHOTO IMHO, a little grainy and blurry and the subject is too far to the left and cut off. But you get points for the idea. |
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| 07/28/2008 01:39:48 PM |
China Whiteby lykofosComment: I just imagined like some horrible parent discovering her daughter's crack collection: "Now you are going to sit here and inject ALL of that heroin until you've learned your lesson!"
The image is a bit too well-lit and saturated for such a serious subject. It looks like she's just sitting down to her breakfast cereal. Not to say she doesn't do this every morning, but "mundane" isn't the feeling one should get from this.
And, as I hinted at earlier, that IS a awful lot of drugs, just sitting in front of her as if she's going to work her way through the box.
Best of luck! |
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| 07/28/2008 01:30:42 PM |
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| 07/28/2008 01:17:35 PM |
f r u s t r a t i o nby bnileshComment: This tells a pretty cool story. Great processing. As a side note, I know the frustration of freckling easily, but never considered taking refuge from the sun in a box :P
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| 07/28/2008 01:16:31 PM |
Priceless Contentsby SDWComment: Nice choice of focus and DOF. Would like to see a different composition, though--maybe landscape orientation with the woman occupying a different lateral position than the box. Still, 7 for what you've done here. |
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| 07/28/2008 01:14:52 PM |
New York outside the boxby love32907Comment: Very cool setup, but could use a good deal more contrast--there's no part of this b/w image that is actually white--as a rule, try to adjust to make sure that happens. |
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| 07/28/2008 01:13:47 PM |
Landing Oneby jjstager2Comment: Looks a little snapshottish. A little more blacks would help get rid of the washed-out look this has, I think. Also, the leaves and plants behind them look a bit oversharpened and way brighter than your subject to the point of distraction.
Best of luck! |
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| 07/28/2008 01:12:06 PM |
Mail-Order Brideby FocusPointComment: haha, awesome concept. Don't quite understand why she'd be in her bra, but Awesome nonetheless. Excellent execution nonetheless. 8 |
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| 07/28/2008 01:09:56 PM |
Our Streetby idnicComment: Sweet! Reminds me of the film "Science of Sleep" a bit. Childish, playful. The yellow cast over the pic is a little intense for me, but I respect the artistic decision to use it. I totally understand it would have looked weird if perfectly white balanced, but maybe just slightly less yellow would have been good. Anyway, 7. |
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