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by kyebosh

Comment by Tammer:
Nice, casual portrait. I might have cropped out the dumpster at the very top, but again, nice portrait.

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by kyebosh

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

I have studdied this shot over and over. Parts of my brain want to like parts of it, and parts of my brain don't want to like parts of it. I'm confued on weather or not I actually do like it.
Technically I believe it's pretty well done. Focus is crisp on parts of the photo, other parts aren't due to the motion blurr, but that was intentional obviously.
I think what's bothering me here is that most of the leg and shoe are see through but the end of the shoe doesn't have that same effect.
Also I think that the photo is rather flat in tones. There's no darks or lights. It's kind of all mid tones. I would like to see some contrast.
What I like really is the gear thingy. The center looks really neat and I could look at that for a long time and not be bored. There is a softness and a pattern there that draws my attention. Actually drawing it away from the shoe.
Background is great, nothing distracting there. Overall a good take on the challenge, but lacking something to really make it pop. Maybe that contrast?
~Heather~

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by kyebosh

Comment by Germaine:
I don't mind that the subject is standing in an alley, but there's a lot of distracting stuff in the background. Nice expression on the girl's face and good colors.

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by kyebosh

Comment by Elaine:
I find myself looking first at her skirt, then her surroundings. I want the face to be the focal point and hers is not even well focused.

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by kyebosh

Comment by rscorp:
Pretty model, cool outfit, great smile and flattering look to her. She almost looks too well dressed for the environment she's in. Overall a good effort and a good full body pic. She's very photogenic, I hope you get to shoot her again with some different backgrounds.

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by kyebosh

Comment by ShannonLee:
the outfit and the settting don't make a good match

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by kyebosh

Comment by moonjeong:
Perspective a little strage...

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by kyebosh

Comment by Nowaytotell:
very nice

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by kyebosh

Comment by CalliopeKel:
Cute pose..Love the alleyway. Nice.

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by kyebosh

Comment by rwouthuis:
The colours are nice as is the lighting. The angle of the shot has worked against you, I feel. By going from a high angle, you've given the impression that your model has very very short legs.