Before It's Bread
by XMountaineer

Comment by desertoddity:
the composition is too crowded and i'm not sure what is all in the reflection or if it's supposed to be related to the bread making.

Before It's Bread
by XMountaineer

Comment by urnotworthit123:
nooooo

Before It's Bread
by XMountaineer

Comment by brownguy:
very creative but a little less negative space would be nice.

Before It's Bread
by XMountaineer

Comment by louisp:
sorry, needs bread (no pun intended)

Must.........Check........My........SCORE!
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Comment by jhess77:
I like the idea of the shot, its seems a bit flat. I would suggest a little more contrast.
cheers,

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Comment by chaitanyan:
right over the screen

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Comment by Moose408:
Nice composition. Don't care for the blue square reflections in the eyes.

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Comment by fototracy:
That could so be me. lol Eyes are nice and sharp.

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Comment by liberty:
The screen is a bit distracting, good idea.

Better Gas Milage than a Prius!
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Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Thanks for that post challenge post showing your work on this. It's interesting to see what someone was working from and the steps involved. Your own remarks indicate that my in-challenge comment was accurate. If this were advanced editing, you could make some selective adjustments to tone down the bright buildings in the background a bit. I also percieve a slight skew to the image. Easy to correct that.