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02/09/2003 02:05:39 PM |
Thanks for the crit, mag; I appreciate it.
I wanted to shoot it straight, but there was a physical limitation (a small wall) that got in the way. This was as straight as I could make it.
I did a USM before saving, yes. The jagged lines are a jpeg artifact,I guess, as they are clear and precise on the full resolution TIF. |
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02/09/2003 12:52:23 PM |
Critique Club
Composition: Excellent. The repetition of the vertical elements is unusual and original. Color choices in post processing worked very well. I think it would have been more effective shooting perpendicular though, instead of at an angle.
Technical: a little soft. Some weird jaggeding ofr the powerlines. I wonder if a smaller aperature would have helped. Did you sharpen at all in post-processing? Things to think about..
Nice shot :) |
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02/02/2003 10:56:52 PM |
| i LOVE this photo!! love the contrast of the red against the grey...excellent work!! |
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02/02/2003 01:55:01 PM |
| Cool effect. I like the mood of this photo. Gritty and urban. The power lines have become a bit jaggy from resizing. Sometimes it can help to blur the photo by one or two pixels before you resize/resample it. |
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02/01/2003 12:35:40 AM |
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01/31/2003 09:50:52 AM |
| This pic needs to be squared up. Red doors are okay. The picture needs a little more of a focal point IMO. - Inspzil |
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01/31/2003 05:44:16 AM |
| I simply love RED, so you win. It is a great image and I feel that it works so well because of the contrast between the red and the grey found in the balance the frame. There is a bit of perspective error, but how do you correct it without a perspective control lens that most DPC members would not have or even be able to use. My pick of the week. Great job - 9 |
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01/29/2003 10:22:50 PM |
| Graded this image once before, could two people have done the identical shot? |
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01/29/2003 07:09:30 PM |
| Color nicely manipulated out, except the red (did you mean to have the dumpster's label show up, too?) Focus is very good, sharp! (yes, the telephone wires look jagged, but that's not your fault or even the camera's!) 6 Swash |
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01/29/2003 06:17:14 PM |
| Intresting effect. Picture is a bit cluttered. |
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01/29/2003 12:59:00 PM |
| challenge met. i like how you isolated just the reds in this shot and desaturated everything else. nice repeating patterns. did you consider closing in on them a little more? maybe cropping out everything around the main building and just have that be the photo ... i think i would like that, but that's just me personally :) |
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01/28/2003 10:47:16 PM |
| this is cool! Perhaps cutting out the buildings on either side would have added more impact to the main building. Good Luck |
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01/28/2003 01:53:42 PM |
| excellent graphic elements! |
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01/28/2003 11:02:53 AM |
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01/27/2003 08:22:22 PM |
| i looked at this image for a long time, i like all the detail and the composition. great shot. |
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01/27/2003 02:49:18 AM |
| a little too overdramatic for my taste. |
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