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05/27/2006 10:13:05 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
10.30 is late out for a kid this age ... good work - good on keeping him awake as well.
Composition:
Lovely I like this, worked the thirds of the pic nicely .. and the leading line of the body seems to work as well.
Subject:
Meets the challenge quite well.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lovely crisp colours .. I love the contours in the kids face .. they help to make this hot work.
To grow its vote?:
No idea sorry ... the top 30 in this challenge have me slightly baffled.
Summary:
Great work .. keep it up you are doing awesome.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/24/2006 11:18:34 AM |
| Nice work but I find the shadow from the ball a little odd |
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05/22/2006 09:14:49 PM |
| I agree with Judy! This was one of my favorites! Fantastic work!!! |
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05/22/2006 09:33:42 AM |
| You were robbed. This deserved top 5 for sure. |
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05/21/2006 11:42:25 PM |
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05/21/2006 01:08:35 AM |
| Great post processing as the child seems to be playing in a storm. nice comp, and tones. |
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05/20/2006 06:18:22 PM |
| Amazing gaze on that boy. beautiful tones. haunting light. 8. |
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05/20/2006 01:07:43 PM |
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05/19/2006 04:49:25 PM |
| A clever title. I like the low viewpoint. |
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05/18/2006 11:40:29 PM |
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05/18/2006 11:37:59 PM |
| This one is really awesome! Great job! |
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05/18/2006 11:22:48 PM |
| this is great. the sky looks awesome. the colors are amazing |
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05/18/2006 03:46:42 PM |
| great photo! love the colouring and the lighting here! (8) |
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05/18/2006 09:57:35 AM |
| Nice lighting and backround, somehow not really fond of the ball though, too big (close to the camera) and should not be so just barely out of focus, either totally out of focus or in focus has my vote. Rest of the image I like. |
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05/17/2006 08:20:02 AM |
| well executed shot with dramatic colors |
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05/17/2006 04:52:40 AM |
| doesn't sit with me seems unbalanced somehow |
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05/16/2006 10:01:39 AM |
| really cool like the colors a lot and the focusing of the boy |
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05/16/2006 08:59:08 AM |
| Excellent..... I love it..... |
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05/15/2006 04:21:25 PM |
| Ahhh, very very good. It has a surreal look to it but it works. The lighting is strong and direct but that serves to isolate the subjects. I hope this does well |
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05/15/2006 12:24:20 PM |
| Hey, that's a soccer ball! :P |
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05/15/2006 09:35:27 AM |
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05/15/2006 08:40:30 AM |
| I bed you are a good cook but dont over cook picture :) :) |
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05/15/2006 07:18:00 AM |
| amazing colors and composition. good luck |
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05/15/2006 05:32:38 AM |
| stunning...no words to add...superb 10 |
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05/15/2006 12:57:07 AM |
| Really nice. Great colors. The perspective is good and I love the ball! Bravo. |
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