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01/06/2003 02:55:37 PM |
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01/06/2003 09:29:15 AM |
Wow Lisa! You have gorgeous lips... Love the grainy steaminess...
Edit: Actually you have a cute nose and nice eyes too... :D
Edit 2: For Mag/Koll's benefit - this is NOT a come one! Sheesh! ;) :)
Message edited by author 2003-01-06 14:54:42. |
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01/06/2003 03:57:15 AM |
| It's sad that I didn't get to vote or comment on this challenge, because I've been on holiday, but wingy - your comment is exactly right! You touched on every decision I made with this photo. I was kind of depressed at the time because I'd put on some weight, and this challenge was kind of confronting. But I decided to go with a self-portrait and explore those feelings. Thanks for thinking about my photo :). |
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01/01/2003 03:56:27 PM |
| I think a tighter crop would help, although I think you might be leaving a wider shot in order to simulate an entire bathroom mirror with your shot. I think the title is vital to the shot, as alone I don't think it's particularly impressive in terms of expression or portraiture, however, if I think of it as you actually looking into a bathroom mirror suddenly it all starts to fit and seems to capture a look of dull self-evaluation that strikes me as very real. Although I could just be reading into it way to far. 8 |
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01/01/2003 03:50:33 PM |
| I like the softness of this shot, but wish the model didn't look so sad - a more sensual feel would have been very nice. I would have cropped off quite a bit of the top - I just feel like I want a tighter crop on the subject. |
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12/31/2002 01:55:22 PM |
| That upper right corner is so white in comparrison to the rest of the photo that it's kind of distracting to me. The portrait it's self it good. I realize that with the title, she's probably suposed to look sad, but I think she would be a very pretty model if smiling too! The focus is a bit soft, but it does't bother me, and I actually think it makes the shot nice. Good luck in the challenge. |
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12/30/2002 10:58:17 PM |
| I want to see you smile. Not a bad self portrait. Good luck in the challenge. Lisae, Lisae, Lisae. |
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12/30/2002 09:18:20 PM |
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12/30/2002 03:53:54 PM |
| I really like the composition, but I am not sure about the graininess. |
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12/30/2002 09:52:20 AM |
| Your model's expression is saying "do I have to do this again"? I am sure that is what you were after but it just doesn't make it great for me. The back lighting is a little too strong also. |
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12/30/2002 01:18:29 AM |
| lots of emotion conveyed. |
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